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Date Posted: 01:29:02 10/17/02 Thu
Author: 君臨
Subject: 我將自己的詩風格稱為"徹底現代主義",不知前人有否用過此名。

我認為,技巧不是新詩的重點.
思想性才是最重要的.
同時也認為,香港的詩賽中,評判多以一篇文章的欣賞角度評詩,
太重優美,而忽略詩的思想性.


《悲慘家庭》

(一)

爸爸催我數鈔票
越數越起勁
數也數不完
而聽不到我微弱的叫聲
「爸爸,我餓。」

我看到
鈔票在獰笑
偷偷地
我吞吃了一張

(二)

我和兒你一起
數鈔票
我越數越激動
誰說我聽不到
你肚子在叫
兒啊
我比你更餓
但是這鈔票
要帶到賭場去
贖回你欠債的
媽媽

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