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Date Posted: 22:11:32 10/20/02 Sun
Author: 方綺
Subject: 當作填詞來講 淺白易明都好
In reply to: 老陳 's message, "試test" on 21:48:15 10/20/02 Sun

這首[詩]令我想起譚校長(應該是他唱的吧?)的[愛在深秋]
哈哈 經典名曲耶
其實詩不一定要深奧卦 簡單得來易記 都幾有趣
阿得本來話鬧著玩 其實出來的效果都幾有趣
相信接龍的人也都抱著這種心態接下去
並不一定代表他們的個人風格

>1. 從你聲音的色彩
>2. 追蹤夢的自由 (@@:
>設a是思想傾向浪漫自由的人，取的是虛景)
>3. 讓跳躍的脈搏打出生命的節奏 (@@:
>從內容和字尾押韻，設b注重音樂，取的是實景)
>4. 叫束縛隨風飛走 (@@:
>回到自由的主題，此人是a或與a有相同傾向的人可能很大，取?>窵?
>5. 一片秋葉也曾如火光 (@@:
>秋和火光是新元素，作者企圖開新話題，筆法上還是取實景，?>i能性傾向於c而可能是b但不可能是a)
>6. 名字也曾在心中停留 (@@:
>此句因前句誘發，涉足過去，個人的動機不明確)
>7. 流過青春年少 多少年後(@@:
>此句以下，全糾纏於走和時候二者，重重覆覆沒有新元素，無?>i能測知任何新資料，從略)
>8. 為你作詩千首
>9. 你從不曾感受
>10. 我心中酸楚 涕淚橫流
>11.你何必搖頭, 我何必苦候
>12 始終也有個時候
>13 在這深秋, 我必須要走。

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