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Date Posted: 00:27:02 09/27/02 Fri
Author: 鄭雅麗
Subject: Re: 請賜教
In reply to: lee 's message, "請賜教" on 23:24:43 09/26/02 Thu

>《來兮歸去》

為何題目用典？似乎與詩的內容脫了節，是嗎？


>樹長了葉
>蔭不住時間的孤單

由實物轉到抽象感情，有意思。


>昨日 如今日的明日

非常好！十分喜歡這句！如果你是我們CHIN1107的同學，這裡我會給你一個+3。

>逝將去汝
>依依不捨
>等待
>在凝固的空氣中
>乘風歸去

長短句的運用到家，一收一放，有節奏感。

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