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Date Posted: 18:10:55 12/10/02 Tue
Author: Ben
Author Host/IP: px3nr.wp.shawcable.net / 24.66.94.142
Subject: Swims
In reply to: Roxi 's message, "Splashes" on 15:41:05 12/10/02 Tue

Ben deep in his own thoughts doesn't realize that he had begun to swim out into the water. Deeper and deeper into the water he goes. He found the water so soothing, making him forget all his problems. Suddenly he wakes up and realizes that he's practically in the middle of the ocean. He tries to swim back but his leg was caught in seaweed. It tightened around his leg. It began to cut into his leg the harder he tugged and pulled on it. He dove under to try to loosen it without any luck. It made a great gash in his leg. He could feel the warm liquid seeping from his leg into the water around him. He cries out in pain. He feels the hairs at the back of his neck stand on end. He turns around. In the distance he could see a shark fin heading his way. He begins to panic. He dives under again trying to find anything that he can cut the seaweed with. He grabs the sharpest rock he can find on the floor. He goes back up for air before cutting. He clasps the rock hard and firmly, he can feel the edges digging into the palm of his hand. He looks ahead to see the shark charging forward only a few meters away. He attempts to cut the seaweed keeping him there. He looks up again but it's too late. The shark opens it's jaws and chomps onto his side, crushing his ribs and lungs. He cries out in pain, the water silencing him. All that came out were air bubbles. He tries to fight it by stabbing it with the rock still in his hand with no luck. The shark just squirmed around, digging it's teeth harder into him. He has no air, he can see his blood coloring the water around him. The water stinging his eyes. He can feel the water flooding his lungs. The pain turning into numbness. He begins to black out. Lights flickering in his mind. His body surrenders to the shark as the shark lets his body go and swims away. His body semi-floating and semi-sinking. He is dead.

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Replies:

Where did Ben go? -- Erin, 14:31:52 12/11/02 Wed
- he's sooo far away! -- Roxy, 13:50:03 12/12/02 Thu
- he's sooo far away! -- Roxy, 13:51:16 12/12/02 Thu
  - Help me with this -- Erin, 12:24:24 12/15/02 Sun
    - Rides away -- Roxi, 19:29:46 12/17/02 Tue
      - Daze -- Erin, 19:37:00 12/19/02 Thu
        Eyes open -- imagination of Erin, 10:44:13 12/23/02 Mon
        Re: Eyes open -- Erin, 13:34:09 12/26/02 Thu
        Re: Eyes open -- - -, 18:05:47 12/26/02 Thu
        Re: Eyes open -- Erin, 20:17:27 12/29/02 Sun
        Walks up -- Mystery Boy, 18:24:38 12/31/02 Tue
        Re: Walks up -- Erin, 14:22:37 01/01/03 Wed
        Rises -- Ben?, 19:56:26 01/02/03 Thu
        Re: Rises -- Erin's old player- - - look at the bottom, 14:27:02 01/03/03 Fri
        :P -- LOL, 15:17:57 01/03/03 Fri
        Re: Rises -- Ben?, 16:59:51 01/06/03 Mon