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] Date Posted: 14:54:28 03/25/02 Mon i've been a little bit of a writer myself and although i am good (imho) writer i lack the skills to keep going on ideas and finish things. just buy reading soem posts have given rise to an idea in my head about teleportation. i am going to write an anime version of the Fly. but we take away the fly and keep the teleportation and disease in! *shudders* oohh... i'm gonna be sick thinking of the monster at the end... ohh... anyway... here is breif snippets of what you'll get if you think its a good idea. “So…” She paused for a few moments, watching him swill the Liquid in its glass. He seemed confident enough. Maybe this wasn’t a wasted trip. “You say you have a project that will change life as we know it. Are you sure about that? Everyone here is saying the same thing.” He grinned. “Yes. That’s is what they say. But there is no truth in their words.” “Like you have something better?” He frowned at her. “I Said I had something that would change life as we know it. Look over there. That man is saying that Bi-pedal robots will change life as we know it. Most likely they will be snapped up by the military and used as weapons like tanks. That’ll change warfare as we know it. Or the virus that’ll rid a person of several known other virus’, that’ll change medicine as we know it. Not life as we know it.” “And you do?” She ask quizically. “Why do you think I was here?” He grinned. and snippet number two. He picked up a new batch of ramen and chewed on it, letting the instant junkie flavor go down his throat. “So what’s stopping you letting it go public?” She dumped rice into her mouth. “She is not ready.” He stated simply. “Not ready? How can she not be ready? I saw her Teleport things fine.” “Inanimate objects. That’s all she can manage.” “How come?” She asked, sipping on the tea she ordered. “Non living object never change, they are always the same.” “And?” “Living being always change, cells dying and getting replaced, chemical reactions, fluids that move.” “But the machine always teleported liquid fine.” She said, “Remember?” “Yes… this one has me baffled…” He Took another mouthful before carrying on. “I used to think it was because there are too many variables in the human structure but that has been confirmed by previous tests…” “Any ideas.” She pushed. “I’m thinking, why is it treating the flesh the way it is? That will be the first thing I have to find…” reply and tell me what you think. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: S. Brundle [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:35:01 03/26/02 Tue Ahhhh...and thus it all returns to "the flesh." This is very intriguing so far, and fits together well, given that you only posted these two excerpts. The only error you may wish to correct is putting capital letters at the beginning of random words (or is this for emphasis?). Anyway, keep up the good work! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: coral [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:14:27 06/20/03 Fri >i've been a little bit of a writer myself and although >i am good (imho) writer i lack the skills to keep >going on ideas and finish things. > >just buy reading soem posts have given rise to an idea >in my head about teleportation. > >i am going to write an anime version of the Fly. but >we take away the fly and keep the teleportation and >disease in! *shudders* oohh... i'm gonna be sick >thinking of the monster at the end... ohh... > > >anyway... here is breif snippets of what you'll get if >you think its a good idea. > > > >“So…” >She paused for a few moments, watching him swill the >Liquid in its glass. He seemed confident enough. Maybe >this wasn’t a wasted trip. >“You say you have a project that will change life as >we know it. Are you sure about that? Everyone here is >saying the same thing.” >He grinned. >“Yes. That’s is what they say. But there is no truth >in their words.” >“Like you have something better?” >He frowned at her. >“I Said I had something that would change life as we >know it. Look over there. That man is saying that >Bi-pedal robots will change life as we know it. Most >likely they will be snapped up by the military and >used as weapons like tanks. That’ll change warfare as >we know it. Or the virus that’ll rid a person of >several known other virus’, that’ll change medicine as >we know it. Not life as we know it.” >“And you do?” She ask quizically. >“Why do you think I was here?” He grinned. > > >and snippet number two. > > >He picked up a new batch of ramen and chewed on it, >letting the instant junkie flavor go down his throat. >“So what’s stopping you letting it go public?” She >dumped rice into her mouth. >“She is not ready.” He stated simply. >“Not ready? How can she not be ready? I saw her >Teleport things fine.” >“Inanimate objects. That’s all she can manage.” >“How come?” She asked, sipping on the tea she ordered. >“Non living object never change, they are always the >same.” >“And?” >“Living being always change, cells dying and getting >replaced, chemical reactions, fluids that move.” >“But the machine always teleported liquid fine.” She >said, “Remember?” >“Yes… this one has me baffled…” He Took another >mouthful before carrying on. “I used to think it was >because there are too many variables in the human >structure but that has been confirmed by previous >tests…” >“Any ideas.” She pushed. >“I’m thinking, why is it treating the flesh the way it >is? That will be the first thing I have to find…” > > >reply and tell me what you think. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |