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Subject: (!) My Poem

Author:
Lara

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Date Posted: 12:31:33 02/01/04 Sun
In reply to: Phantom Poet 's message, "Welcome All" on 14:13:29 11/06/02 Wed

This is the first official poem i have written and i would like to know what you think about it.I will require a reply asap.Thank you.

YES PRIME MINISTER

You have been put to shame
Ashamed,rotten eggs on dark suits
I will not be your brainchild
IVF, father-unknown,mother-Eve
Mmm...Immaculate Conception in 21st century
Yes Prime Minister, you should be tied to a stake
A puppet government you run
Yes Daddy,Mr. Stars and Stripes

I want to be a child
Be reborn Sir by father Democracy, mother Freedom
Ego like the Twin Towers
Crumbled,Shattered,Disappear
Conservatives,Labour....I can't take any more
No,Prime Minister
Should it have to be so hard?

TB a deadly disease
Claims millions of innocent lives
Yeah,you, i am talking to you
You can hear me but can't see me
I am your conscience
Yes,Prime Minister, I am YOU!!!

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