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Date Posted: 13:19:28 01/16/04 Fri
Author: Raphaela
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Subject: Re: To Know The Vault Of Thought
In reply to: AGS 's message, "To Know The Vault Of Thought" on 07:04:06 01/07/04 Wed

Interesting imagery you use here Al, which helps the reader to visualise although this needs several readings and I am still not sure I interpret it correctly - perhaps we can discuss?

Just wondering about the last stanz - 'salt' is usually a symbolic expression of a corresive element in a relationship - was wondering if that is what you meant here?

R

>To peer
>there knowing -
>
>the conglomeration
>of assortment
>so true,
>
>that glances
>by rim
>
>of your eye
>
>And knowing,
>I see
>there too,
>
>quite well;
>The pages you roll
>as you turn
>so sweetly
>your eye:
>
>It shall
>catch glances the sun
>as it saturates it way,
>right to you;
>
>As a dove
>alighting
>its fall
>
>So softness
>it beams
>your light
>
>To gaze,
>seek only those treasure
>that you hide
>
>and so well hidden
>the banks
>inside,
>
>by softest mud
>of the river;
>
>That long stemmed grass
>in peak
>so waving
>
>in tears,
>that shall never grow
>
>I saw you by you small desk
>weaving and hence
>
>you've decided to say
>I just might
>do it this way,
>in prance
>
>Soft spells turned
>by ornamentation of words
>
>They shall drip their lavender
>pearl
>as tiny dew drop
>
>to the bucket you hide;
>near
>inside
>
>That constant dripping was
>always a drag;
>
>no more weapons inside
>for the ride
>
>as you pondered in softened,
>a skill,
>to make your words wide
>
>Contain
>all that's honey,
>
>the recipe contained -
>
>with its sugar
>and melt
>down your side
>
>With, like a silt
>such tiny bits
>there so felt
>
>and there you
>to glide
>as felt
>
>It was all that way for you,
>to touch,
>
>with sanded fingers
>all that's velvet;
>
>by your heart
>
>Its many membranes so familiar to you,
>as small locked portals
>
>and so wide opened
>you look
>
>Far cross
>that river side
>
>Its turn and salt
>felt deeply
>and guide

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Replies:

Re: To Know The Vault Of Thought -- AGS, 21:38:03 01/16/04 Fri
- Re: To Know The Vault Of Thought -- Raphaela, 00:14:30 01/20/04 Tue
  - Re: To Know The Vault Of Thought -- AGS, 21:56:04 01/28/04 Wed