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Date Posted: 14:49:39 03/02/04 Tue
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB17a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.179
Subject: Re: Nightmares of Hope
In reply to: Gray Squirrel 's message, "Nightmares of Hope" on 00:21:26 01/27/04 Tue

Cool imagery, alliteration works well.

>Nightmares of Hope
>
>Painted eyes and satin slacks,
>Obsession's palette waxes, winces,
>Intensifies it's loss.
>
>Sacrificial martyrs goad,
>Offer up salvation's road;
>Nonexistance, avoided, twice.
>
>One sweet moon, hearts too fast,
>Useless rock, desert sky,
>Say a prayer, your liar's lie.
>
>Tackle those fantastic frames,
>Heave in sleep, and carry on;
>I've seen your laughing hands.
>
>Roses for your eyes, my child,
>Slippers soft and wet with sweat
>To escape it all... worthwhile.
>
>-Gray Squirrel

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