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Date Posted: 14:03:44 06/13/04 Sun
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 80.43.156.45
Subject: Re: Magic Juggling.
In reply to: Pegasus 's message, "Magic Juggling." on 06:06:27 04/06/04 Tue

The rhythm and rhyme give this a fast even pace. Not sure the last stanza works as well though.

Hope all is well with you Pegasus.

Raphaela


>Since I feel
>no freaking fear for thee
>only you may cast
>your magic spell on me.
>You may appear to me
>as swift amazing juggler
>in a breathtaking act
>as hurling struggler
>trying to seize control
>over my chaotic emotion
>while I dance away on the rhythm
>of your devotion.
>
>Secure in catching
>you let my feelings twirl
>rapid fingers arouse me
>to a mindspinning swirl
>bended high above me
>you shield my inner spirit
>keep me away from insanity
>by touching the depths of my pit
>while we both experience the healing
>of our own private pain
>desperately fighting in cadence
>to stall the oncoming wane.
>
>As I cling on to you,
>you never ever let go of me for good,
>not even when I once again
>assaulted your believe so brute.
>You always somehow manage
>to straighten your back
>to guide me tender towards sooth.

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