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Date Posted: 15:08:01 06/20/04 Sun
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 80.45.178.21
Subject: Re: My Darling
In reply to: Jjaz 's message, "My Darling" on 18:45:29 05/10/04 Mon

The imagery you use paints a vivid picture and the tone ha a haunting quality.

>My Darling:
>
>Tears bled like a gaping wound
>And my eyes, a blue lagoon,
>Held none of them from the tide
>My soul, an ocean returned empty
>
>My cries, like wild birds at night,
>And my agony, a descending light,
>Found no mercy in its blackness
>My soul, the last sound of eternal sleep
>
>Thoughts conspire like a lunatic�s dream
>And my desire, a harmonious scream,
>Evaded even the most simple complexities
>My soul, a melody of unusual sounds
>
>My heart, like whispers in a vacant hotel
>And my loneliness, a midnight bell,
>Heard only every other retarded beat
>My soul, a vortex of hidden rooms
>
>My darling, like white birds in spring
>And my Own, a picnic bring,
>Sit beside me and hold a silver candle
>My absent soul, a path well traveled

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