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Date Posted: 00:28:44 05/25/02 Sat
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB01a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.163
Subject: Re: For Love of The Big Apple! (Volume One)
In reply to: Laraine Smith 's message, "For Love of The Big Apple! (Volume One)" on 09:04:44 05/22/02 Wed

You make your thoughts very clear here, with capital emphasis as well. I think you could further develop these statements to reveal raw emotions within, which can in effect be more emotive.

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>Is The Big Apple strong enough to face the depth of
>her sadness, and the pain of what happened?
>A world that loves her
>Feels the need to make known
>Their pain for her, which they are too weak to hide!
>Numbers of her people are never again to be found.
>Our minds are now troubled.
>Our world has been assaulted.
>Bullies overshadow us to the farthest of limits.
>This we will NOT agree to!
>We are NORTH AMERICA!

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