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Date Posted: 00:30:14 05/25/02 Sat
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB01a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.163
Subject: Re: Night Sight
In reply to: CJ 's message, "Night Sight" on 09:25:33 05/23/02 Thu

Ah the CJ style I remembered. You are certainly very masterful at this type of writing - not only do you effectively conjur up the visual image, you also convey the atmosphere of suspense and tension. Well done.

R


>Warm August night
>I move silently
>Hidden by shadows
>A glimpse of flesh
>Through venetian blinds
>sliced into pieces
>Catching my breath
>I mold thoughts
>till the wholeness of you
>is mine to touch
>
>© Coastaljoe

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