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Date Posted: 12:04:49 05/30/02 Thu
Author: AAAAGGGSSS
Author Host/IP: dialup-63.215.236.81.Dial1.Stamford1.Level3.net / 63.215.236.81
Subject: Re: Images
In reply to: CJ 's message, "Images" on 10:01:25 05/30/02 Thu

think you'r on a roll coastal, this sounds something like one of my older pieces, no offense there, but i did write one somewhat, somewhat similiar, if you want to see:

The River

The salt on my lips
is even, clean, luscious
as I dab it off
coil my tongue
think of you


The night is harsh
deep
with waves frothing
knowing my thoughts
as I lean
on a rail
down to the butt
with my Camel,

eyes flashing
like a 20's star

thanks, Al

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