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Date Posted: 13:58:45 06/01/02 Sat
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheM06b.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.194.16
Subject: Re: Thunder
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "Thunder" on 15:04:50 05/31/02 Fri

Deliciously sensuous yet that endline gives a hidden depth and invites to reader to read between the lines ...

R

>Your carefree sashay
>so ponderous
>weighted,
>gowned
>in that cherry
>colored robe
>I bought you
>
>That swept
>the floor
>in private waterfalls
>of thinking
>so wet, drooling,
>often quite sticky
>like the bee's
>tongue
>
>about open flowers
>
>that constructed
>wide ravines,
>chilled outlets
>wildest splashing rivers
>all that flowed
>automatically
>
>rapidly
>
>in silence
>
>picture perfection
>of endless thundering
>
>that swished
>and swirled
>deeply
>with aroma
>
>and lacing
>
>let me in
>to mists
>so towering,
>fragrances
>of purest
>citris
>
>the mist
>harbouring
>
>to become centered
>in your orchard
>protective sunlamp -
>
>as it widens
>cloaks you
>again
>as silvered shields
>
>turn your me kissed
>garments to other colors -
>
>this time
>orange
>the color I now drink
>
>With eyes like telescopes
>that have forgotten heaven
>for the moment
>you turn to me
>and I see the great
>s trikes of thunder
>fireballed lightning
>the collosal
>cerebral activity
>that seemed
>to sneek in
>always
>for my benefit
>
>as a wind fills the room
>you turn and speak
>are you ok?

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