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Date Posted: 13:25:58 06/02/02 Sun
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB11a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.173
Subject: Re: Bite
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "Bite" on 12:10:16 05/27/02 Mon

The way you write, you conjur up the visual image as well as the delicious aroma and taste of this fruit - I could almost feel its nectars escaping.

I am not sure I would split the word lavishly though in the last stanza.

R


>The smooth
>peach
>rolls upon the table
>radiant in fuzz
>all the time
>
>Like
>velcro waiting
>for my hand
>
>To attach to
>cling to
>burry itself into
>
>As grapple fingers roll too
>about it
>clench tight
>squeeze gingerly
>
>Waiting nectars
>
>About to squirt
>lavish
>ly
>in my bite

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