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Date Posted: 10:57:40 06/08/02 Sat
Author: Gemini
Author Host/IP: webcacheB01a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.163
Subject: Re: God Knows
In reply to: CJ 's message, "God Knows" on 15:27:59 06/03/02 Mon

Hi CJ,
When I first read this, there was something about its form I didn,t like. But on re-reading a few times I find it quite good, it flows well and I like it particularly read quickly, not pausing for emphasis at all.

Gem.


>
>You’re like a rainbow
>your colors shine
>You light up the darkness
>in these eyes of mine
>I look for treasures
>where none exist
>Not knowing why
>I feel like this
>You smell like flowers
>in a meadow green
>Your laughter singing
>in a mountain stream
>I walk your boundaries
>to catch your smile
>God knows I’m wanting
>to stay awhile
>
>You float like clouds
>across the sky
>Tease me with images
>as you go by
>I reach to touch
>but you’re far away
>Passing from sight
>when I want you to stay
>You’re like a storm
>that never lay’s down
>Dancing above me
>here on the ground
>I admire your fury
>at times like this
>God knows I’ll wait
>for your sweet bliss
>
> © Coastaljoe

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