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Date Posted: 01:00:44 06/01/03 Sun
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB03a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.165
Subject: Re: The Heat Of The Night
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "The Heat Of The Night" on 17:35:56 05/31/03 Sat

Love the title and the poem - a gentle and tender tone to it. I would take away the brackets as the stanza stands alone and of should be off, would blacked be blackened? - sorry just the teacher in me! However, I love the dreamy quality of the poem.

R


>I love to venture
>inside you
>
>drift
>long canals
>noone goes
>alone
>
>just be there
>with you
>just talking
>
>occasional drops
>and echoes
>around
>
>our voice
>carrying
>for miles
>
>(enough light
>ricochets
>of glassened
>waters
>like
>blacked mirrors
>a full moon to light
>sway
>and sing to us
>of times like this before
>alone
>and deep)
>
>in the forbidden canals
>in which we walk
>discover alone together
>find solace in
>the heat of the night

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