Re: Gentle Memories(One for the Road) -- Unicorn

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Date Posted: 23:56:03 07/05/03 Sat
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB03a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.165
Subject: Re: Gentle Memories(One for the Road)
In reply to: icyheart 's message, "Gentle Memories(One for the Road)" on 20:07:22 06/13/03 Fri

Well if this is your parting gift, I hope you will find your inspiration to write again soon Icy.

I love the opening lines, so visual. I think many readers could identify with the overal theme of the poem and these lines stand out for me:

We may be apart
But forever connected

ai that's the rub isn't it.

Raphaela

>Like rain upon the desert floor
>You settled my anguish
>
>Your touch gentle...
>as the early morning dew
>
>Causing hopes to soar
>Making our love transcendental
>
>We may be apart
>But forever connected
>
>By the love in our hearts
>Memories are forever
>
>This connection of the heart
>No one can sever
>
>I feel you everywhere I go
>I feel you in everything I do
>
>I hear your voice as the wind blows
>When alone I feel you... miss you
>
>I miss you in a crowd of friends
>My love for you
>
>No one will ever subdue
>Though dreams may fade
>
>Hopes will tarnish
>But if you listen close to the wind
>
>You will hear a serenade
>of Unchained Melodies
>From a heart filled with love
>
>icyheart
>Take care my friends

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