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Date Posted: 00:00:37 07/06/03 Sun
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB03a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.165
Subject: Re: Ringed Moon
In reply to: AGS 's message, "Ringed Moon" on 16:48:38 06/12/03 Thu

Sorry I am only just getting to these gems Al but, as you know, my hospital visits have kept me away from commenting but I hope to catch up now.

I really love this one - you certainly know how to lift words off the page into some new etherial height.

What imagery:

and a gown
that sweeps
blonde sand

into submission


and I adore the last stanza

for toes of sapphire
ringed
to dance
a moon high
to keep
rhythm


perhaps it is my fondness for the moon or is it the fact that I also have sapphire toe rings ;)

Raphaela






>your pulse
>is streamlined
>moves genetically
>all through you
>
>one big wave
>at shore
>
>the moon hanging
>in crispness
>
>luminosity
>
>and brilliance
>combined
>in an eggshell
>
>with me looking
>You dressed
>so China,
>
>and a gown
>that sweeps
>blonde sand
>
>into submission
>
>to stay put
>
>for toes of sapphire
>ringed
>to dance
>a moon high
>to keep
>rhythm

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