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Date Posted: 06:38:13 07/15/03 Tue
Author: AAAAGGGSSS
Author Host/IP: dialup-67.75.102.105.Dial1.Stamford1.Level3.net / 67.75.102.105
Subject: Re: Saturday's Obligatory Kiss Goodbye
In reply to: Gray Squirrel 's message, "Saturday's Obligatory Kiss Goodbye" on 09:08:55 07/12/03 Sat

Hi Squirrel

I think this was a reallly nice poem, filled to capacity with tenderness, however, I feel you make too many references to different metaphorical items, and it would really work better as several distinctive statements, Perhaps it merely just shows the confusion resident with this type of tragic loss of love, Al

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