Date Posted:00:52:17 08/08/03 Fri Author:Raphaela Author Host/IP: webcacheB03a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.165 Subject: Re: Subterfuge In reply to:
Rafaél
's message, "Subterfuge" on 15:37:16 08/04/03 Mon
Good to see your work again Rafael.
Interesting use of imagery, which adds to the depth of poem.
Raphaela
>Subterfuge
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>As it does in manner such, the sound around my feet
>is only how this rain does bead upon the dust.
>Perhaps you missed me more, for while what was did not,
>as retrospect deserves at least what past.
>Does it rain for you? When summer burns in blood
>that spills across the sky, before the day has gone.
>A semblance has been touched, perhaps for you have once
>I know how now that feels, and still do wish as such.
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