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Date Posted: 00:55:41 08/09/03 Sat
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB03a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.165
Subject: Re: Artistic Waste
In reply to: Paris Lovecraft 's message, "Artistic Waste" on 12:28:04 07/26/03 Sat

I really like this Paris - good use of imagery and a strong poem and an interesting idea of what can be 'forced and thinly spread' 'upon the defenseless page'

Good to see you here again - we must catch up sometime.

Raphaela

>Discontent
>in my own head
>has forced upon me a dilemma:
>to force upon the paper,
>with the pen,
>an idea;
>a poem;
>artistic waste
>
>Thus,
>I delve into my brain,
>the seething mass
>of writhing meat
>and electric thought;
>I delve with pen, like
>a maestro's baton,
>a magician's wand,
>a lightning rod,
>dipped and stirred,
>in a storm of the electrical persuasion
>
>Thus,
>upon the defenseless page
>I force and thinly spread
>the gray matter,
>the artistic waste
>
>ag.

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