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Date Posted: 15:00:11 08/15/03 Fri
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB02a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.164
Subject: Re: Kissing The Sand
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "Kissing The Sand" on 08:59:29 08/14/03 Thu

This is beautifully descriptive, tender and romantic.

Raphaela

>Let me be sweet:
>to
>you,
>
>offer trinkets
>found, during
>long walks
>at shore;
>they gleaming,
>
>Soft
>and with a
>fragility
>
>on
>wet
>sand
>
>and sparkle
>
>coarse and sharp
>they are
>and clear ..
>so rounded
>
>I pick them up
>wash them, in the sea
>look into them
>
>to hear
>their story
>some wondering
>
>Be bleached
>like this
>
>tangible,
>well crafted,
>as I hold you
>
>still
>
>in a forest
>of night
>
>The sea will
>understand
>
>stretch more
>forward
>often
>to allude;
>
>that all the same
>on a beach of gold
>where diamonds found
>proliferated
>abound.
>
>I kiss you sweet as sand
>my tongue
>to elope
>with you
>
>drip
>a pearl
>
>some diamonds in
>
>not bland
>and touch the sea;
>forever

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Re: Kissing The Sand -- Ashley Owen Smith (paris), 13:10:41 08/16/03 Sat