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Date Posted: 15:52:51 08/30/03 Sat
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB05a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.167
Subject: Re: Clean Waves (Crashing Against My Chest)
In reply to: Doghouse Reilly 's message, "Clean Waves (Crashing Against My Chest)" on 00:09:38 08/28/03 Thu

I particularly liked the last stanza.


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>Ha! She spat
>Poet?
>Writer?
>ARTIST!?
>You are an AFFRONT!
>You have made a mockery of art!
>You have made a mockery of Justice!
>You have made a mockery of
>our relatioship
>selling our scandal
>to third-rate magazines
>& not making ANY money!
>Contributors copies
>contributors copies!
>You & all of those magazines
>& editors & snooty literary types
>can kiss my cantakerous ASS!
>
>She is wearing a white blouse
>& no bra
>& her breasts bounce
>alluringly against the fabric
>when she reaches for her coat
>
>Turning toward the door
>so hard her hair flies
>up, sending ripples of her
>warm fragrance into our room
>& I can almost imagine
>those clean waves
>crashing
>against my chest
>flowing toward my stricken face
>
>Look at you!
>You're LOSING it, J.
>I swear!
>Get a GRIP on yourself!
>Let GO of your illusions!
>That you know NUTH-ing of ART!
>
>Let go! Give up!
>Just enJOY yourself, again
>for godsakes!
>
>Don't go,
>I managed
>Don't GO, goddamnit!
>
>But she was already gone
>& I alone like a ghost
>lost in the ravaging depths
>of that warm aroma
>that clean perfume falling
>like mist on my arms

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