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Date Posted: 07:56:54 02/14/03 Fri
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB05a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.167
Subject: Re: Fallen
In reply to: Todd 's message, "Fallen" on 09:30:14 02/06/03 Thu

A poignant and well-expressed poem. I think many people could relate to this in their own ways. The rhyme scheme and repetition work well and give it a lyrical quality.

Raphaela


>Fallen
>
>I show the world a smiling face,
>To hide from them my fallen grace,
>I lost the faith I once embraced,
>and I weep in the other room.
>
>For reasons I can not explain,
>I chose a life that I disdain.
>You may see joy, but I feel pain,
>and I weep in the other room.
>
>The dreams I have, they torture me,
>Salvation I may never see.
>I pray that God will set me free,
>and I weep in the other room.
>
>I show the world a smiling face,
>and I weep in the other room.
>
>
>Todd

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