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Date Posted: 12:13:50 02/22/03 Sat
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB07a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.169
Subject: Re: So Simple
In reply to: Gray Squirrel 's message, "So Simple" on 02:49:01 02/21/03 Fri

I like the way the pace moves steadily through this poem adding emphasis to each profound thought. Poignant last stanza.

R

>So Simple
>
>Maybe it's right,
>Maybe it's wrong,
>Maybe somewhere
>The time has gone.
>
>Maybe you...
>Were the one.
>
>I saw you walking,
>It was so simple,
>One foot before another, and
>That's how you caught me,
>Standing still.
>
>All at once,
>I wasn't there.
>
>Maybe the light, it
>Was too strong.
>And when I think of you,
>All of you...
>I can only consider that
>You were the one.
>
>And now there is night,
>Crashing daylight,
>Formed from shadows,
>Scraped together from
>Linen moments
>Like those.
>
>-Gray Squirrel

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