Re: The Coma -- Unicorn

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Date Posted: 17:35:44 03/01/03 Sat
Author: PoeticHeart
Author Host/IP: Syr2-Dial-242-235.i2eyenet.com / 207.127.242.235
Subject: Re: The Coma
In reply to: Raphaela 's message, "Re: The Coma" on 13:33:38 03/01/03 Sat

Thank you for the warm welcome... i really enjoy this site and look forward to posting more of my work.
poeticheart
>Welcome to Unicorn Poetic - good to see you here.
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>I like the way this poem develops each thought - as if
>speaking out loud - and then returns full circle as if
>retreating to sanctity. Reveals a lot from its
>multi-layered depth.
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>Hope to read more from you and please feel free to
>comment on other posts.
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>Raphaela
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>>The Coma
>>Comatosed, i wake to a moment of clarity
>>I see more than i have ever seen before
>>Where have i been?... who was i with?...
>>Where did they go?... why have they gone?...
>>
>>Alone in this cold world again...
>>Darkness surrounds my inner most thoughts...
>>How can i release these ties that bind me?
>>Do i really wish for them to relinguish thier grip?
>>I think sometimes i do... and others , well i do not
>>know
>>
>>Pain is something we all play with at times...
>>Yes play with , cause pain is just that a toy....
>>Emotional weight never lifted, and carried far...
>>And just as it becomes more than one can bear...
>>More weight is added to test ones strengh even more..
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>>So back into my coma i fall....
>>Hoping one day to awake to in a better place...
>>With all those in my life where they belong
>>By my side.. suporting all my decisions
>>One day i will arise from this depth
>>No longer in a comatosed state
>>
>>by: poeticheart

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