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Date Posted: 10:47:49 03/05/03 Wed
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB07a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.169
Subject: Re: POETRY HAEMANTICS
In reply to: GEORGE CARLE 's message, "POETRY HAEMANTICS" on 05:56:57 03/05/03 Wed

I like the way reality invades the imaginary world - good use of imagery running through the poem.

'Haemantics
Haemorrhaging
On poetry’s skin.'

Not one word too many but many underlying meanings.

Raphaela





>Celine Dion sings
>In the nerd room
>A multicoloured dandelion
>Flares on the TFT screen
>And I write
>Typing words
>On the laptop
>
>Meaning to write
>Poetry
>From dreams and reality
>From deep inside
>
>Creating and crafting
>Like blood from a severed vein
>Not staunched
>But soaked up
>With a cloth
>The letters and words
>Stain the page
>
>Haemantics
>Haemorrhaging
>On poetry’s skin.

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