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Date Posted: 01:30:53 03/15/03 Sat
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB04a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.166
Subject: Re: But...?
In reply to: Silvana Krculic 's message, "But...?" on 11:16:39 03/13/03 Thu

Good to see you again Silvana.

A reflective poem that many could identify with. So easy not to write what inspires your soul, but that is where your heart is.

I particularly liked these lines

'Only hopping you'd never
Overshadow my illusions'

Raphaela

>I typed so fast
>Tossed away some words
>Stayed up all night
>To write a better song,
>Thinking--
>Some day you'd be impressed
>
>When I dreamt:
>We kissed in the rain
>Again... and again...
>
>Wanted to say:
>In case you're looking
>I'm here on the same stage
>
>But,
>When I look into the light
>I promise not to get excited
>The thought of you
>Can get me blinded
>
>oOo
>
>I was told not to talk of
>"Love," use the word or repeat it
>Whenever I wrote a (love) song
>You were in it
>
>Was also told:
>Not to write Hallmark- poetry or
>Talk about uncertainty,
>But to stay on the more optimistic
>Level,
>How'd they know you're my jewel?
>
>Could not tell where the
>Night is pulling me
>I am...
>Only hopping you'd never
>Overshadow my illusions
>
>oOo
>
>Last night
>I held the moonlight
>In my hand
>Thinking:
>Will I have to erase you- again
>From this shadowy platform
>
>So, silently please go through
>The page,
>You'll find me next to you
>On this life's stage.
>
>SILVANA KRCULIC

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