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Date Posted: 14:01:19 04/09/03 Wed
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB03a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.165
Subject: Re: Magic Balls
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "Magic Balls" on 12:05:57 04/09/03 Wed

I love this Al - it has a sense of escapism and nostalgia that also invites the reader to remember back to such times. This is the type of poem I needed to read just now, thank you.

R

>The sun flies high
>round and round
>a surface
>
>of skies;
>
>light blue
>that has
>
>an occasional white dove
>break the blue
>
>I had thoughts the other day,
>serene they were
>encompassed caverns I had walked in
>talked, and played
>
>It was that way with you - often
>round the play grounds;
>whatever they were -
>
>how we talked, walked
>held hands
>and smiled
>
>Your bat always ready
>and me deciding
>which balls
>
>would bring us
>magic luck
>today

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Re: Magic Balls -- AAAAGGGSSS, 20:37:20 04/09/03 Wed