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Date Posted: 09:29:27 04/11/03 Fri
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB05a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.167
Subject: Re: A Striking Blue
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "A Striking Blue" on 20:54:32 04/09/03 Wed

I like the escapism and imagery in this poem as well as your own unique style, as well as the hidden depth and message.

R

>Let feathers fall
>as they may; drift
>skies alone
>
>peak some later date
>when well enough rested
>
>Winds come
>warm
>sooth
>ing exchange heats
>at burning points
>
>Let me take you to
>the freezing ice;
>it huddles close
>the sides waters
>crisp and cold
>to hurry
>by
>
>There
>drink
>and be refreshed
>by what happens
>
>the sounds and bubbles
>that find a way
>to nourish
>
>the ponds so frozen
>caked
>and needing a thaw
>
>A sun
>there arises
>usually
>
>exerts a heat -
>cracks thin iced
>branches very delicate fingers
>that stretch
>holds
>reserve
>for its life
>
>in
>and
>Antarctica
>
>with winds
>
>So cold they veer
>near you dance, whisper
>its not worth it, this cold
>cracked
>
>Aching this much
>the snow frosted too
>
>desiring
>to make
>the great escape
>
>to a land
>retrimmed
>in dew
>
>and grass
>of the greenest green
>
>a sky striking blue

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