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Date Posted: 14:31:59 05/16/03 Fri
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB05a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.167
Subject: Re: Transparent and Sleek; The Billows
In reply to: AGS 's message, "Transparent and Sleek; The Billows" on 08:58:15 05/14/03 Wed

Your poetry, in its own unique style, always has the power to transport me to another time, an etheral place.

It takes me several readings to understand but I think that is part of the charm that it is not so basic, as mine sadly is, and your expression certainly has an original style.

Great to see you back in the Unicorn's glade, we have missed you - glad your pc is sorted now!

Raphaela

>Oh, � how she did walk -
>a sleekness, and softly
>by in darkness
>heat, of solitary
>night, as I lie so nestled
>sleeping,
>with nails lit as anything blantant;
>constellations
>in the sky, 'pon barren warmth -
>the shoulders affirming
>
>that I did live
>still, alive, and that life
>did buzz around me
>as fruit tasted
>by hungry nats
>everywhere
>
>I gained deepened
>comfort here .., so love
>in covered secret thresh -
>the holds; it tender
>like streams
>waters
>that aches
>to kiss
>lick deeply
>the grass ..
>
>Asleep. enjoyed the wisps
>lands, heretofore unoccupied
>not inhabited by
>we three mortals, all dainty deep
>and mighty
>
>the roads, where Goddess'
>roam, so grand
>and shoot their light
>like spectacles
>
>some great falls there
>flowing, that fall
>to sunken beds, that cry
>from vantage, fall some more
>and on me
>
>and men there look
>like walking glass,
>clear, transparent, as the young leaves
>do, there in sassy, skinny, virgin trees
>and limbs, that do their dancing
>
>'pon all the silky bees
>with those paper mache wings
>with more veins than paper
>make their rounds popping flowers
>and carry full buckets
>of spermatazoa
>
>In the trees
>men rode graceful
>and robust
>sheered horses, with fine necks
>and hairs that seemed
>to sweep
>the grounds
>say no more litter:
>in garish clothing
>spotted, hewn
>in multi - fabric -
>designs
>
>
>the hills flew tender
>with weeping long grass
>of beauty treatments performed
>behind the storm, in blackness
>and had gotten soap
>in their eyes
>a beaming sun
>with caring ..
>
>And all of us
>just laughed hilarity
>with
>heart and sweet mist
>oh did its roving
>in nectars, found
>gaieties
>among them, each
>other seeking
>not hid, did we
>in the dimness or
>mistaken land
>we traveled, in ours
>
>without those depp
>loves, that make it so
>much unsuitable
>for purities
>of grandeur
>steep loves,
>such as ours
>in falling rivers
>
>we drank always in:
>crisp,
>divinely
>
>a carved cup from the
>slavish granite; from slides
>that lifted
>to challenge grand heavens - one
>self and
>all us
>
>And frolicked so
>in warmth and skies: her magical hand
>so deep, sweet, warm
>which heaped and poured
>more moisture:
>fluid dew for me
>and all that grew
>and flowers
>
>lengty petals
>all there
>thin
>
>allowed
>and nature
>
>she knew,
>with and understanding
>that clutched several stars
>so
>extended
>in her
>assurance subtle
>existence, she said
>
>I am
>here, and will not
>leave, an angel
>from far regions you might laugh
>if I were
>to tell, and so
>I remain
>mum
>
>Ask, and all luxuries
>shall be
>kept
>in this apron
>that falls
>from the
>sky
>
>skintillating laughs
>and tilts
>and roars
>do emit
>from stars:
>soft lavenders -
>were
>
>yet harvested
>and endless
>their soft billows
>deep blankets
>sullen sleep
>
>to comforts,
>of - a goddess;
>she may give, take
>and does weave
>in sunlight
>bye
>the night

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