Re: In the car -- Unicorn

[ Show ]

Support VoyForums

[ Shrink ]

VoyForums Announcement: Programming and providing support for this service has been a labor of love since 1997. We are one of the few services online who values our users' privacy, and have never sold your information. We have even fought hard to defend your privacy in legal cases; however, we've done it with almost no financial support -- paying out of pocket to continue providing the service. Due to the issues imposed on us by advertisers, we also stopped hosting most ads on the forums many years ago. We hope you appreciate our efforts.

Show your support by donating any amount. (Note: We are still technically a for-profit company, so your contribution is not tax-deductible.) PayPal Acct: Feedback:

Donate to VoyForums (PayPal):

[ Login ] [ Contact Forum Admin ] [ Main index ] [ Post a new message ] [ Search | Check update time | Archives: 1, 2, 3, [4], 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 ]

[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

Date Posted: 22:52:04 08/29/02 Thu
Author: Leisa*)
Author Host/IP: ACA9DA53.ipt.aol.com / 172.169.218.83
Subject: Re: In the car
In reply to: Avy 's message, "In the car" on 21:28:57 08/29/02 Thu

a touching {no pun intended} piece, Avy.
although I think you could delete this line and it would read better:
"so, here, i tell you - "

when I first read this I felt like there should be more but the more I read it, I think it is the perfect little poem as it is.

Leisa*)

>yesterday, i meant
>to write upon a pale
>blue slice of paper
>as much of my
>heart as i could
>but my soul buckled down
>then tears followed soon
>because all i could write
>was a regular behaviour
>that i perform
>so, here, i tell you -
>
>in the car i lightly
>hold my hand as
>though it is yours.

[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

Replies:

Re: In the car -- pet, 00:45:49 08/30/02 Fri

pet and leisa -- Avy, 19:28:40 08/30/02 Fri