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Date Posted: 21:39:38 09/23/02 Mon
Author: pet
Author Host/IP: pcp01030787pcs.dothan01.al.comcast.net / 68.59.65.132
Subject: Re: Not Even
In reply to: Dr.P 's message, "Not Even" on 13:30:13 09/23/02 Mon

RE:
>
> Olive dark seducing eyes.
> Shyness puffed out confidently,
> In poise, belying, nerves and pride.
>
> Why do I cry inside seeing this beauty?
> Are gems now stolen goods that,
> I can't want worn again for me?
>
> Worn wants that out run my heart.
> Stuck in your trap, to rot not ever
> To be savoured again.
>
> To touch would tell but I feel
> I'm grabbing now, for I know I intend
> No decent heart the kindness they deserve.
>
> It's all in the suitcase, I can't close
> For the journey I can't take, to the place
> Where you won't be, and my visa's off limits.
>
> At least watching the dark Italian eyes
> Watch me back, sends a rush somewhere still.
> But now it's from abstaining.
>
> The knowledge that I can but I won't
> An arrogant reward of a past of missing the point.
> Soon they'll give up on me anyway.

bitter sweet...sometimes missing small points have great lasting effects...I love the stanza about the suitcase...great writing...making me want something I can't have also

pet
>^..^<

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