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Date Posted: 01:21:02 09/29/02 Sun
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB07a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.169
Subject: Re: Fear
In reply to: pet 's message, "Fear" on 01:14:54 09/24/02 Tue

The tight lines and imagery, particularly 'crimson' work well with the theme of the poem.

p.s. best of luck for your surgery - I hve done local too and survived!

Raphaela


>Fear
>
>awaken supine
>algid cloths enshroud
>flugent white light
>fear is now avowed
>
>echoing whispers
>promising comfort
>phantom hands touching
>mind flashes alert
>
>disoriented
>trying to focus
>buzzing deep inside
>ravenous locusts
>
>gates bursted open
>chaos is unbound
>Charon waits silent
>nothing to expound
>
>crimson eruption
>artesian magma
>streaming gracefully
>reinforcing dogma
>
>faith supersedes fear
>delving deep inside
>extracts malady
>Charon is denied
>
>pet
>9-23-02
>
>*lil note...transform this into your fear or whatever
>you choose to see...I just found out today I may have
>my surgery with only a local...meaning I will be awake
>during the procedure...I'm not looking forward to that
>at all...

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