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Date Posted: 14:52:24 11/06/02 Wed
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB11a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.173
Subject: Re: Roaring Sun
In reply to: AGS 's message, "Roaring Sun" on 05:40:31 10/30/02 Wed

Strange ... I was teaching about descriptive writing today and used the description of clouds as a tool to convey so much more and here I read your poem and see it come alive.

I always find your poetry massages a tired and aching mind - write more my friend.

Raphaela


>The clouds always
>seem to walk about
>like a rumor
>that gathers
>in different directions
>
>giving off fresh steam,
>exasperation
>over this
>or that tale
>heard
>and rumbling
>in disappointments
>
>The skies willing
>to let them
>have their way
>
>so intolerable they get
>if disrupted, or cut short:
>the fuse they exhibit
>with widened eyes
>manifest now
>in huge chunks
>of lightening
>that begin
>to flow
>from their heart's
>veins
>
>A debate that rages
>on who was right
>in this
>thine only
>confrontation
>
>which rumbles now
>so loud
>with attempts
>to just
>make their point
>
>as others gather
>to join
>this heated
>commotion
>
>The wind
>an onlooker
>comes huffing
>and puffing his
>view, till they all
>mount their steeds
>to gallop off
>in the given direction
>
>of the plaguing
>problem so dimly seen
>off an running
>in the distance
>
>a race for cover
>
>the safety of the moons
>promising shine
>that turns
>half a horizon away
>saying
>I've heard of another part
>of the universe
>quiet
>from the sun

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