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Date Posted: 01:06:25 08/09/02 Fri
Author: Raphaela
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Subject: Re: I never meant
In reply to: Ambrosia 's message, "I never meant" on 20:53:46 07/24/02 Wed

The theme of this poem relates to previous ones you have posted here. However, I think you need to develop the ideas and take this one further so that it can reach the quality and depth of your other poems. I realise it may be difficult if this issue is close to you and it may be something that you can do in the future, although the 'writing out' often works as good therapy.

Raphaela

>The cut was not deep.
>I mean I could not sleep!
>So I took the knife,
>And then I would take my life.
>
>I did not know that they would cry.
>I thought they would be happy if I died.
>Really I did not know the cut was so severe!
>Now they can not stop my mother's tears.
>
>But I guess it is to late.
>To late, somehow maybe this was my fate?
>Maybe i was meant to die?
>I never meant for them to cry...-Ambrosia

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Re: I never meant -- icyheart, 04:51:52 08/10/02 Sat