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Date Posted: 10:33:30 08/10/02 Sat
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.145.221.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.145.221
Subject: Re: I wish
In reply to: CJ 's message, "I wish" on 10:06:59 08/09/02 Fri

Ah your writing CJ brings
such delighted appreciation for me even
though the subject may be sad [or glad].
In this poem, you have expressed much
so very well!!! Thanks for the share!

Susanne

>I wish

>You come to mind every time
>I walk along the shore
>In my eye I see you cry
>It just makes me miss you more
>Everyday I come this way
>Hoping I might find
>Upon this lonely stretch of sand
>Some way I can unwind
>Between us now there is a wall
>Built through our aches and pain
>Maybe if I let it fall
>I’ll see you once again
>
>Not long ago there was a scene
>That threw us far apart
>It came upon me by surprise
>Like a dagger to the heart
>You lost all your interest
>Left me on the ledge
>It rocked me back just far enough
>I slipped right off the edge
>Now every morning I go down
>To walk along the shore
>In my eye I see you cry
>It just makes me miss you more
>
>I wish I may I wish I might
>Go to you and hold you tight
>I wish today I wished tonight
>To be with you and it's all right
>
>© Coastaljoe

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