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Date Posted: 03:08:55 08/31/02 Sat
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB11a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.173
Subject: Re: Stallion
In reply to: SandDollar 's message, "Stallion" on 10:45:34 08/26/02 Mon

This implies horse and rider entwined - and I love the metaphor

'Thighs
Of rolling thunder'

really helps the reader to visualise.

I used to go horseriding but never felt at one with the horse but it is something else to observe someone who is or just to watch and marvel at the power of a stallion in full flight.

Raphaela

>A skilled steed
>Thoroughbred
>Stallion of
>Fervor
>
>Champion of
>Velocity
>
>Frisking
>
>Zigzags
>Playfully
>With focused
>Fusing
>Gaze
>
>Thighs
>Of rolling thunder
>Harmonize
>All streaks of
>Jagged glare
>
>Kindles
>In high spirited
>Teasing
>And
>Knows
>
>That I will
>Eagerly
>Climb
>On his back
>
>To feel
>The wind
>
>� SandDollar; 2002

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