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Date Posted: 13:46:49 09/12/02 Thu
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB09a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.171
Subject: Re: Don’t Mean To Offend
In reply to: pet 's message, "Don’t Mean To Offend" on 16:33:23 09/11/02 Wed

There seems to be a hidden agenda to this poem - perhaps somebody had asked you to write out your feelings?

I know exactly what you mean by this though - I am a very private person and although I often write out my feelings, I try to do so metaphorically, you cannot write out emotions to order otherwise there is no soul in your poetry.

Food for thought.

Raphaela



>Don’t Mean To Offend


>we all grieve

>in our own way

>some will cry

>some will smile

>some will scream

>some will say nothing

>some will remember

>some will forget

>some will carry on

>some will not

>some will die

>some will, not I

>in our own way

>we all grieve

>I grieve in mine

>you grieve in yours

>I don’t tell you

>how to do it

>so please don’t

>don’t tell me

>don’t mean to offend

>but making me write

>is telling me how

>how I should grieve

>we all grieve

>in our own way

>I remember that day

>9-11 is personal friend

>I do grieve

>just not through a pen

>don’t mean to offend


>pet

>9-08-02


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