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Date Posted: 02:43:28 09/19/02 Thu
Author: Dr.P
Author Host/IP: cache-loh-ab02.proxy.aol.com / 195.93.33.8
Subject: Re: Unfettered
In reply to: pet 's message, "Unfettered" on 21:07:39 09/18/02 Wed

>Unfettered
>
>Free flowing prose
>Rythmn can�t be stopped
>Everything intrigues you
>Excites your inner child
>Thoughts invade your head
>Hurriedly you grab a pen
>Inspiration can�t be ignored
>Never compromised
>Keeping visions true
>Epiphanies come to few
>Realise its your gift
>
>pet
>9-18-02
>
>I'm a free thinker, are you?
>
>Who deems what is the "right way" to write?
>Who told you your opinions are always right?
>Why do you think yours is the only view?
>Why should I change that line, for you?
>Is it my subject you really hate?
>Is it too hard to contemplate?
>Do you think my words don't rhyme?
>Do you think I write far too sublime?
>How should I compose my thought?
>How? Should I read that book you bought?
>When it tells you how "WE" should write, will you
>enlighten me?
>When will free thinkers ever be allowed to just be
>free?
>
>pet
>9-18-02
>>^..^<

Nice itteration of independent thinking. You should free yourself from rhyme one time, because that too can be liberating, but believe me I am not trying to give advice cos I like your work, and usually can't resist rhyming a bit in mine too.

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Re: Unfettered -- pet, 06:16:32 09/19/02 Thu