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Date Posted: 21:12:13 07/27/02 Sat
Author: AAAAGGGSSS
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Subject: Re: In A More Realistic Light
In reply to: Silvana Krculic 's message, "In A More Realistic Light" on 16:52:21 07/27/02 Sat

hi Sil

How ya doing ?

You kinda wrote this poem fast, right, cuz I think it had some difficulties in logic. Like for example the line I am thinking of is this one:

You promised you and me,
but took away you from my yesterdays.

Now get this, if the guy split, ya know, flew the coop, wouldn't you not have him in your "tomorrows". You would always have him in your "yesterdays" since they are memories, c'est vrai ?? Although as I will admit, those memories might be a little spoiled.

I realize English is a second language to you, but this line is just a trite awkward:

but took away you from my yesterdays.

Perhaps "Left yesterdays" I guess you are getting the point here. But perhaps it all is just telling us how nutty and very much bewildered we all can get with loss of love. I think the truth actually is somewhere in between. That is it was a horrible experience, and very difficult to put into words right. Nice work Sil, smiles, al

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Re: In A More Realistic Light -- icyheart, 05:46:43 07/28/02 Sun