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Date Posted: 14:04:49 07/28/02 Sun
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB12a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.174
Subject: Re: Treasures
In reply to: CJ 's message, "Treasures" on 12:28:46 07/28/02 Sun

Excellent my friend - good rhythm and flow here - and I have often thought such things as I read others' words - almost like peeping into a diary at times.

Really enjoyed this, thank you.

Raphaela




>I read your words today
>My friend
>I love the way
>They twist and bend
>You set the scene
>You pave the way
>Your images are on display
>
>I took a ride
>Today my friend
>I saw the road
>That has no end
>Felt the passion
>Felt the joy
>Saw those images you imply
>
>I took the steps
>You laid for me
>Walked the clouds
>Beyond the sea
>Rode on the wind
>Towards the light
>Found a path through your sight
>
>I heard the song
>You played for me
>It has such strength
>This melody
>It picked me up
>Turned me around
>Trapped my senses in the sound
>
>I took the treasures
>That you sent
>To hold them dear
>Is my intent
>They speak of love
>They warm my soul
>In my heart I feel their pull
>
>© coastaljoe

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  • Re: Treasures -- sp99, 19:38:44 07/28/02 Sun
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