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Date Posted: 14:44:47 07/28/02 Sun
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB12a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.174
Subject: Re: Forever Of Time
In reply to: SuSanne *_* 's message, "Forever Of Time" on 15:32:38 07/27/02 Sat

Some nice lines and imagery here.

R

>
>FOREVER OF TIME
>
>
>I see the forever of time
>Standing upon the cutting bow,
>Of this, in the night�s passing ship
>Carrying cargos of seeds to sow.
>
>Heading towards an evening sky
>In air so still, it is as freshness crisp,
>With phat lines of navy blue to azure
>Being softened by horizon's mist.
>
>A crescent moon placed in blue
>Is a heavenly beacon of light
>Shinning an everlasting sideways smile,
>Promoting feelings of oh so bright.
>
>A solitary seagull on its seven-year quest
>Glides along with this humming ship
>As if a harbinger of good from above
>In this scenario of a spirit survivor's ocean trip.
>
>While phosphorus dances amongst sea waves
>Above miles to go across forever brimming life
>Of tiny seahorses and fish being fished by huge whales
>Representing much good .. that comes along with
>strife.
>
>
>� SuSanne &*_*&
>
>26.7.02-smb.powell
>All rights reserved
>
>Phat ~ a hip-hop slang's way
>of saying fat as in good, as it fast becomes
>part of the world�s vocabulary!!!
>
> "Above miles to go across forever brimming life"
>
>I realized upon spell checking,
>of this line that just flowed from me
>strongly hints of Robert Frost,
>of whom I greatly admire.
>

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Re: Forever Of Time -- sp99, 19:31:32 07/28/02 Sun