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Date Posted: 10:58:02 08/01/02 Thu
Author: Highlander
Author Host/IP: pD9037922.dip.t-dialin.net / 217.3.121.34
Subject: Re: Mums Toast
In reply to: CJ 's message, "Re: Mums Toast" on 17:23:20 07/31/02 Wed

Hi CJ.....thank you for making my day with a lovely comment about my writing efforts...much appreciated...so how are you these days?

Gimme some hours before I read your stuff I see you posted, a bit short of time right now...

take care and thanks again CJ
Highlander

>Excellent write, very moving and forcefull in it's
>message.
>As far as i'm concerned your writing skills are finely
>honed
>and beautifuly expressed. Thank you very much for
>sharing this.
>
>
>>Slurping soggy coco pops in the lighted corner
>>giggling at cartoons
>>I am oblivious to the bills that pop through the front
>>door
>>cushioned by the worn carpet weighing down the kitchen
>>table
>>as Mum escapes out the back one
>>
>>I have no need for a haircut
>>my survival kit a pencil crayon,
>>a soap dish and anything from my favourite colour
>>keeps me company in the trenches filled with jagged
>>nettle
>>I was born not knitted like my teddy in brown
>>so I am bound to make mistakes if I move
>>and not like him lay still
>>
>>the slide at the plaground is not nearly glazed or
>>fast enough but at least it gives me height
>>to see my house from a distance
>>it looks so close but still far away
>>how can it be I still can smell Mums toast
>>and familiar soup from another world
>>and feel the blows from one of my so called uncles
>>as a giant fist lands hard on her cheek
>>I am still nerved by crashing glass
>>and jump even when the waiter at our local restaurant
>>looses grip of pastella
>>
>>I am moved by shades of light green and insect yellow
>>in summer
>>it reminds me of the rich children in the country and
>>the smell of posh jam
>>stirs my nostrils and even at my age concern
>>I still sniff the air like a curious pup
>>when bramble bushes bare fruit profits
>>
>>Mum has passed a long time ago
>>a single mother no more than 60 kg
>>barely touched 23
>>beautiful, hazel eyes like mine
>>and a smile to die for
>>
>>which literally speaking she did!
>>
>>I never understood life
>>never will
>>and that is why I stand here at Mums grave
>>watering the willows
>>and isn�t it funny
>>
>>how I can still smell Mums toast.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>Written and dedicated to a little girl who got caught
>>up in the murky drug hell, losing her addict Father
>>and her Mother shortly afterwards from raining blows
>>of one of her boyfriends, it is not a poem but a mere
>>few sentences that I put down as the little girl (now
>>a teenager) has lots of courage but no writing skills.
>>
>>I have limited writing skills myself but how could I
>>say no to this young brave lady.
>>
>>A sad world indeed and whenever I feel tired or
>>exhausted from life�s schedules I just have to call
>>this little friend, she reminds me of how small we
>>really are.
>>
>>Thanks for listening
>>Highlander

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Re: Mums Toast -- Highlander, 10:58:53 08/01/02 Thu