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Date Posted: 23:27:04 08/07/02 Wed
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.97.244.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.97.244
Subject: Re: Infinity (sp99 to Megan)
In reply to: Megan 's message, "Re: Infinity (to sp99)" on 09:58:51 08/07/02 Wed

Megan hi...*smile*,

I had the feeling you were young BUT not that young,
I totally agree with CJ and Gem. about your abilities!!!
As I said, I could be totally off about 'ashen' and
perhaps if you tape yourself reading it, then you could
decide which you like better and I TOTALLY agree with
Gem. when he says this "...The thought that droplets join their brothers only to be separated again, to begin the cycle all over, - much like life in general, excellent!"
and very much why I liked the read of your poem so
much with the feeling that Infinity is there yet not seen,
somewhat like the evaporating mist of your poem. I hope
I have the privilege of reading your work, over years to come!!!
*grin*....go girl!!! Susanne &*_*&

p.s. Although older, I've only been writing since '99
so perhaps poetically we are about the same age...OR
your older? *big grin*

>Thank you very much. :) I will take your suggestion
>under consideration; see if it works better! *grin* I
>really enjoy and appreciate feedback like yours,
>because, being only 15 (and writing that poem at 14),
>I need all the help I can get! -Megan

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