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Date Posted: 06:21:42 08/08/02 Thu
Author: AAAAGGGSSS
Author Host/IP: dialup-65.58.184.119.Dial1.Stamford1.Level3.net / 65.58.184.119
Subject: Re: Shining Through
In reply to: Megan 's message, "Shining Through" on 11:27:13 08/07/02 Wed

really nice job Megan, flows, and is radiant

I don't think you really need this line:


between trees:


it seems redundant, and belabors the reader to read again. I know stuff like this cuz I have been critted for doing it all the time,

beautiful vision of a walk thru the woods, felt the serenity you drew here, Al

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