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Date Posted: 04:45:41 08/10/02 Sat
Author: icyheart
Author Host/IP: wv-bkly-ubr-b-024-159-122-106.charterwv.net / 24.159.122.106
Subject: Re: Please
In reply to: Gray Squirrel 's message, "Please" on 19:34:03 08/09/02 Fri

I felt like you were talking to me. This poem has a lot of sweet desire written into it. I do hope you get what you are asking for because I have been here and it is no fun at all. A very nice read.
icy

>Please
>
>Is it too much to ask?
>I just want to hold you.
>I don't really know why,
>And I don't care about why.
>
>Oh, I know about hormones,
>And genetic traits, and
>Inspiration fought by millenia
>Survival to survival.
>I know about lust and loneliness,
>Societal taste and pheremones,
>Passion by design,
>And want beyond decision.
>
>I don't care what I know,
>I don't really want to know,
>I just want to hold you.
>
>Sometimes we thought the same,
>Sometimes we didn't.
>And I suppose the things we
>Didn't think the same
>Weren't things we couldn't.
>We always had long conversations,
>Whatever...
>
>I don't care about thoughts
>And conversations.
>
>Yes, and memories and dreams,
>This poem could be so much longer.
>I would rather write a poem that
>Would just bring us together,
>Wrap our arms around each other.
>
>But...
>I don't care about writing.
>I don't care about obsession.
>I don't care about breathing.
>I don't care about begging.
>
>-Gray Squirrel

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Re: Please -- sp99, 10:28:52 08/10/02 Sat