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Date Posted: 14:28:46 08/12/02 Mon
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB05a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.167
Subject: Re: Honey babe
In reply to: CJ 's message, "Honey babe" on 07:31:13 08/02/02 Fri

CJ - do you realise you make me sing all your poems! Perhaps that is your intention as I know you are a good lyricist but jeez I must be driving the family nuts!

I am going to have to find a way to link sound in with this so you can play a guitar and sing the tune *grin*

I like this and the repetition works well - not to mention some good lines.

'Is it me honey babe you reach out to touch
When the night is too long you're tossing too much'

- here you link together the speaker of the poem with the subject, taking the reader almost into her mind and then back again full circle to possible (or is it hopeful?) cause.

Good stuff - keep 'em coming.

Raphaela

>Is it me honey babe, Could I be the one
>Is it my face you see when you're having fun
>Is it me honey babe that spins you around
>My lips you feel when you're heart starts to pound
>When you can't get away from the feeling inside
>There's no place to go no place to hide
>Is it me honey babe
>Is it me?
>
>Is it me honey babe that stays on your mind
>Eats up your hours stealing your time
>Is it me honey babe could I be the one
>Is it me honey babe
>Is it me?
>
>Is it me honey babe you reach out to touch
>When the night is too long you're tossing too much
>Is it me honey babe that brings on a smile
>Is the key to your heart mine for awhile
> Am I holding you hostage frying your nerves
>Making you blush touching your curves
>Is it me honey babe
>Is it me?
>
>Is it me honey babe that stays in your thoughts
>Do I hold the keys to all of your locks
>Is it me honey babe could I be the one
>Is it me honey babe
>Is it me ?
>
>� Coastaljoe

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