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Date Posted: 04:40:09 08/13/02 Tue
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB01a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.163
Subject: Re: Bearded Gray
In reply to: Gray Squirrel 's message, "Bearded Gray" on 22:57:27 08/06/02 Tue

An appropriate title for the message of this poem. Conveys the sense of loss well with some good images and lines

'These stone barren days
Remain mute'

Raphaela

>Bearded Gray
>
>He searches for
>His reflection in the
>Bottom of a bowl,
>Reaching deep into the
>Water, cursing.
>
>A wolf howling
>In a cave on
>A cloudless night.
>
>No mountain this,
>Not in this sandstorm,
>No moss, no lichens,
>No reeds.
>
>I bleed my heart beating
>In dreams to you
>Whole wells of waiting
>To speak again.
>
>But this faded image
>And secluded moon,
>These stone barren days
>Remain mute.
>
>-Gray Squirrel

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